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Sunday, May 12, 2013

Michele Albert -- Her Last Chance

Michele Albert -- Her Last Chance

Rated: ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ . ♥   {4.45}
Action: ♠♠♠ / Emotion: ♣♣♣.♣ / Romance: ♥♥♥♥ / Sensuous: ♦♦♦.♦ / Suspense: ♠♠♠♠
Action: 3.0 / Emotion: 3.5 / Romance: 4.0 / Sensuous: 3.75 / Suspense: 4.0  //  Laughter: 0 / Tears: 1

  2010: RT {Romantic Times} Book Reviews: Romantic Suspense Nominee
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Setting:     Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
                  Seattle, Washington
                  London, England
Era:           Present Day [2010]
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Having read all the books included under The Avalon Investigations Series of Michele Albert's book list, would like to divide this selection into two different series; naming them: {1} The Pre-Avalon Series and {2} The Avalon Investigations Series.

As usual, enjoyed reading Michele Albert's exciting, sensual book Her Last Chance, the third installment in The Avalon Investigations Series (to date, a hopefully, open-ended, three-book series).   Albert took a different tack when she wrote this book as compared to her previous books -- this book is definitely part of a series.   Rather than write a story that could easily be read as a standalone book, Albert continued to expand on the premise of Avalon Investigations that she noted in the back of book two, Tough Enough.   Albert included the short point of view voices of {1} the hero and heroine from Tough Enough, {2} the arch-villain that enters all three books of the series, and {3} the man who gives the orders to the operatives of Avalon.   The way Albert incorporated each of these people into this book left no doubt that she has more stories about Avalon stirring around in her head.

Herein lies the problem.   Albert has set up a sequence of events in books two and three that ensure that once a fan begins reading The Avalon Investigations Series, s/he will want to read the next book in the series . . . and the next (if it comes to that).   So where is the next book?   Is there going to be another Avalon book?   After looking at Albert's list of books on Fantastic Fiction, FictionDB, and her Website, it appears that Albert has followed the path of many other authors and decided to delve into the world of Fantasy Romance.   (Angels of Punishment, a Smashwords e-book published in March 2011 appears to be the first book in a Fantasy series (to be followed by Catch a Falling Angel).)   What happened to all the stories floating around in Albert's head about the Avalon mercenaries, and, in particular, Ben's story?   This series needs an ending!

Where is Albert headed with regard to the arch-nemesis of Avalon, Rainert von Lahr?   Very originally, Albert has taken this thief and purveyor of the stolen, the looted and the forged and made him very multi-faceted.   She has left the usual path taken in Romantic Suspense novels of painting the villain in all black and has introduced shades of gray.   The dialogue coming from the mouth of Avalon's villains make perceivably valid points, thus, exposing many gray areas into the lives of these 'not quite so dastardly' criminals.   And, yet, there is no doubt that the good guys are still supposed to defeat the bad guys.

When von Lahr was introduced in book one, Hide In Plain Sight, there was no doubt that this very sophisticated, long-time art thief needed to be stopped (having killed Avalon operatives in cold blood).   In the second book, Tough Enough, von Lahr is the man behind the actual thieves and is presented in a family setting, holding a child.   Now in this third book, Albert has created another layer to Rainert.   Instead of just being a specialized art thief, von Lahr has the same problems as any other intelligent boss, juggling lots of balls, trying to keep all his many clients happy and satisfied, while trying to stay one step ahead of Avalon.

Her Last Chance was a bit difficult to inspire emotional engagement because it was so hard to warm up to the heroine, Claudia Cruz.   Again, Albert was very original in the creation of this ball-busting, mean-mouthed heroine.   Having been raised by deeply prudish parents, it was hard to identify with a heroine that was a femme fatale type with an admitted exhibitionist streak.   Claudia was introduced in Tough Enough and even though she came across as a woman who was not afraid to use her blatant sex appeal to her advantage, for some reason the fact that her fragrance was overwhelming added a touch of crassness to her personality.   (That is not a good perception to have of a heroine.)

Albert did such a great job of developing Claudia's personality and background that she enabled even an old prude to come to accept Claudia in her different-ness.   Claudia's bold, blunt use of "sex fu" (defined on page 140) took a bit of getting used to, but once you accepted her blatant use of sex appeal in her mannerisms, dress and dialogue, she was a likeable heroine who experienced the same insecurities about herself and her man as any other woman (be they frumpy or svelte).

The one thing that made Claudia such an outstanding heroine was that she was not afraid to stand up to anyone to do her job.   It was obvious that Claudia's personality rubbed people the wrong way because she lost her job as a Dallas police officer after she had to shoot a rapist in the line of duty -- not because the shooting was questionable, but because she was not liked.   Claudia used her role as an Avalon operative to stand up for the little guy -- something she strongly believed in.   And even though Claudia was loyal to Ben for all he had done for her, she was still strong enough to stand up to him when the situation called for it.

If Albert excelled at one thing in this book, it was revealing the sexual chemistry and heat that flowed between Claudia and the hero, Special Agent Vincent DeLuca.   Even though Vincent and Claudia fought like cats and dogs when they first meet at the Alliance Gallery crime scene four months ago, the attraction was mutual and instant -- and both of them tried to ignore the pull.   This book opens while Vincent and Detective Matherson (Philadelphia Police Department) watch Claudia draw the eyes of every man in the Champion and Stone Gallery when she enters to interview Arnetta Gallagher, the gallery manager, about the theft of a Greek Corinthian helmet that Vincent (as a member of the FBI's Art Squad) is also investigating.

Pairing Claudia with Vincent was a study in contrasts.   Just as Claudia was not shy about breaking rules to catch the thieves (and necessary since she no longer carried a badge), Vincent was adamant in his belief system that everyone should have to follow the rules, just as he did.

Trusting and believing in his sense of right and wrong, of justice and fairness, was the only way he could get by in this crazy, [screwed]-up world.   (Vincent, page 42)

. . . agents like Vincent DeLuca, who truly lived up to the myth, whom she envied, and whom she so resented because he underscored all her weaknesses and moral frailties.   (Claudia, page 76)

"I'm not going to apologize for my belief in basic ethics, or for trying to hold on to it as best I can in a world that doesn't seem to care much about anything."   (Vincent, page 138)

As Vincent and Claudia each begin to investigate the rash of art thefts to small galleries in the same localized area, they sparred and fought until they eventually agreed to work together on the case.   Albert did not entertain readers with the kind of nail-biting suspense one usually finds in a Romantic Suspense novel, but she did keep readers glued to the pages to see what was going to happen next.   The first half of the book features the steps and procedures that Vincent and Claudia take to solve their case.   It was a total surprise when Claudia figured out who the culprits were and the reason they had targeted the specific galleries they chose to rob.   There was only one small incident that pointed to the fact that Shai Lewis and Candy Bartowski (the art thieves) were targeting Vincent's geographical region.

Since Claudia was such a sexual creature, it stands to reason that when she finally decides to hook up with Vincent their lovemaking would be hot and spicy and have that special sizzle that means the author has written an outstanding love scene.   During the entire book Claudia was as unashamedly aware and desirous of Vincent as he was of her.   It was also gratifying that Vincent was strong enough to go toe-to-toe (no pun intended) with Claudia when it came to the bedroom -- he did not let Claudia call all the shots.   As stated earlier, Albert did a much better job of featuring the romance and sensuality of this story rather than drawing the reader deep into the suspense of solving the art gallery thefts.

Although it was easier to like and identify with Vincent, Albert did not develop his personality to the same degree that she did with Claudia.   As an Italian, Vincent came from a big-family background that made him feel like the sexy man next door.   But while we were admiring Vincent through Claudia's eyes, why didn't Albert explain why Vincent wore those strange, skinny ties (that were mentioned quite often).   Also, if some of Vincent's background had been presented, we would understand why he was so obsessive about everyone following the rules, leading to his particularly intense dislike of Avalon and its mercenaries.

Vincent and Claudia's story was quite often interrupted as Albert took readers to another part of the world to look at what was going on with several other characters.   One of those characters was Ben Sheridan, the "Big Dog -- if not Top Dog -- of Avalon" (page 49).   Ben is a fascinating secondary character and Albert has successfully inspired great interest in him by giving him a point of view voice in this book as well as the previous one.   Ben is multi-faceted -- a down to earth guy who teases his secretaries / bodyguards, and yet a very intelligent, strongly determined, seemingly solitary man whose story demands to be told.   Not only does his arch-nemesis want to know everything there is to know about Ben, but so do I.   What kind of special heroine could Albert create for this mysterious man so he can have his own book?   Albert inspired even more interest in Ben and the mystery that had brought Ben into the secret world of preventing art theft by revealing who really ruled Avalon.

Will Tiernay and Mia Dolan (Tough Enough) briefly appear with a point of view voice in this book as well.   As an ex-detective, Will was patient, smart and thorough, so Ben asked Will to look into a twenty-year-old cold case, the disappearance of Arthur and Gareth Whitlea (father and son).   And to further muddy the waters, the disappearance / murder of the Whitleas was somehow tied to the murder of Maria Balestrini, a young Italian girl killed during World War II.   While Will juggles his Avalon cases and looks into these three murders, he also squeezes in time to be with his fiancé, Mia.

Albert showcased her skills at weaving an intriguing story as she slowly lead up to the entertaining encounter that happened in the famous store, Harrods, in London.   Known for being a sharp dresser, it was no surprise that while shopping for something snazzy to wear for his interview with Mrs. Whitlea in West St. Aubry, Will would be seen by another well-dressed man, Rainert von Lahr.   Rainert exhibited to the cowering, constantly spooked Vanessa how to turn a potentially disastrous situation to his favor.

For some reason Albert continues to build interest in the quite confusing secondary character, Vanessa Sharpton, as she tags along after von Lahr like a little lost puppy in her desire to see Will brought to justice for killing her beloved boyfriend, Kostandin Valaj, back in Boston four months ago.   One cannot help but wonder where Albert is headed when it comes to Vanessa.   She is now a wanted criminal, yes, but she is also a poor little thing that got drawn to the dark side because she just wanted to be loved.   So, again, Albert is addressing the shadows of right and wrong.   And since Albert has invested so much time in the creation of these two characters (Rainert and Vanessa), what is she going to do with them in the end?   Arrest them?   Kill them?

There is something about the way that Michele Albert writes, that appeals to the reader in me.   Therefore, it is not surprising that I would readily recommend Her Last Chance as an enjoyable, intriguing, sensual book to read.   It has the requisite factors that made for a great read: {1} Vincent DeLuca, a down-to-earth, sexy, 'by the book' lawman hero; {2} Claudia Cruz, a unique, overwhelmingly bold, determined, hot, 'break the rules' heroine; {3} a bit of entertaining action to inspire interest in the investigation into multiple art gallery thefts; {4} a modicum of suspense about the thieves; {5} the sharp, deeply sensual interest between Vincent and Claudia that led to {a} hot, spicy, sizzling lovemaking, and {b} the desire to have their own happily ever after; and {6} the continued development of multi-faceted secondary characters (that appeared in previous books of the series).   The one major drawback about reading this book is that Albert has prompted readers to want to read more . . . and then changed directions in her writing.   Instead of giving readers more Romantic Suspense books featuring Avalon (particularly Ben Sheridan), Albert has decided to write Fantasy Romance.
--Vonda M. Reid (Friday, December 28, 2012   2:46 p.m. : 5:10 p.m.)     [295]

Books In The Series: "The Pre-Avalon Series"
# Date Title Hero Heroine
01.09-1998Absolute TroubleJulien Langlois; stripperDulcinea "Dulcie" Quinn; former cop
02.10-2002Getting Her ManDr. Jack Austin; archaeology professorDiana Belmaine; Private Investigator
03.09-2003Off LimitsRobert "Bobby" Michael Halloran; detectiveEmma Frey; homicide detective
04.03-2005One Way OutDr. Alex Martinell; paleontologist; professorCassie Parker Ashton; treasure hunter

Books In The Series: "The Avalon Investigations Series"
# Date Title Hero Heroine
01.05-2006 Hide In Plain SightGriffith "Grif" Laughton; Avalon OperativeFiona Kennedy; bookstore owner
02.04-2007Tough EnoughWilliam "Will" Tiernay; Avalon OperativeMia Shaeffer Dolan; art restorer
03.03-2010Her Last ChanceVincent DeLuca; FBI Special AgentClaudia Cruz; Avalon Operative
04.hoping. . . Ben Sheridan; Avalon CEO. . .
05.hoping. . . Russ Noble; Sheridan Expeditions. . .

Characters Found In "Her Last Chance"
Character Description Also In
Vincent DeLuca[Hero] FBI Special Agent (1) self-righteous FBI ego; surplus testosterone; with FBI's new Art Squad (16) self-righteous; government yes-man (42) follows rules (62) strange, skinny ties (64) more "direct" than "stealthy" (74) had to be best at everything; restless energy; male arrogance; honest; incorruptible; dedicated; loyal; good lawman (77) dark, wary eyes; ridiculously long, thick lashes; aggressive five-o'clock shadow; bit of chest hair; smelled of summer nights and musky male (79) unexpected charm; flash of warmth and sweetness; sheepish grin (80) the kind of man who kept his promises (81) lean, sleek darkness; long fingers (130) long lean muscles (142) above-average deductive reasoning skills (174) Italian; 3 brothers; 2 sisters (246) 3. Her Last Chance
Claudia Cruz[Heroine] heavy floral perfume; everything about her dominated and demanded; sinuous strut; brassy curls; cinnamon-red lipstick; cold black eyes (1) low, raspy voice (2) loose corkscrew curls in artful disarray; dark, assessing eyes (3) tight skirt; swinging hips; head turner (4) carnivorous interloper (7) private contractor for art theft recovery (9) warm skin; lush curves (13) 5'9"; strong-willed (16) tall; long legs; curves in all the right places; beautiful (38) basic black 9mm Beretta (43) Claudia shot rapist; lost job because she was disliked (60) exhibitionist quirk (109) showcased curved breasts and rear; toned muscles in arms and legs; dirt poor girl whose parents crossed the border to birth her in USA (64) quick; resourceful; always seemed to land on her feet (67) copper-colored curls (69) one hot woman (71) hot-blooded; hot-tempered (73) blunt; craziness; unpredictability (148) warm, supple skin; lean muscles; firm breasts; lush curve of hip and bottom (153) tall; lithe; muscled; toned tendons beneath smooth brown skin; womanly hips; smallish breasts (159) faint wrinkles at corners of eyes; a few scars; a mouth made for kissing and smiling; big, dark eyes; sexually self confident (160) grew up in rough neighborhood (173) big, mean mouth (174) needle phobia (196) Mexican (246) preferred doing things on her own terms; solitary (265) persistent (351) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
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Tía AdelaClaudia's aunt (260)3. Her Last Chance
Maria Balestrinikilled in the 1940s; her murder tied to Whitlea (182) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Candy Bartowskiin Leone's bar; bottled blond (86) great smile; irresistible sparkle in blue eyes (86) Vincent's stalker (283) Johnny's girlfriend (284)3. Her Last Chance
Officer BachmanPhiladelphia PD (324)3. Her Last Chance
Donald "Digger" Brodystocky; reptilian brain (30) fenced stolen property for mob (31) bottom feeder; looked like could wrestle bull and win (32) fences stolen jewelry and collectibles to his connections in Jersey and Miami; dabbles in drug dealing and extortion (142) Donald (280) 3. Her Last Chance
Mr. ChampionChampion and Stone gallery owner (10)3. Her Last Chance
Jeff ChuClaudia's contact in Dallas; impeccably dressed; young Asian-American; worked for major insurance agency (256) unfriendly, rude and a stick in the mud (257)3. Her Last Chance
ConsuelaClaudia's grandmother; frail; new dentures; lived with Claudia's parents since husband died 2-y-a (259) long gray braids; barely spoke English (260) 3. Her Last Chance
Edward CooksonVincent's supervisor; tall; distinguished; early 50s (55) calm, commanding tone (59) jangled keys and chance in pocket with thinking (302)
Rose Dempseyowner-manager of Alliance Gallery; small woman; overly tanned; 60s (112)3. Her Last Chance
Mia Dolan[Heroine of Book 2] Will's sweet little thing in Boston (176) Will's fiancé (177) museum reproductionist from Boston (252) pretty; slender; lots of dark hair (253)2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
EllieBen's executive secretary / bodyguard; small; wiry; much tougher than anyone would expect; long blond hair; blue eyes; penchant for pink (45) treated Ben like one of her many brothers (46) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
FabianaManny's wife; left him (260)3. Her Last Chance
Arnetta GallagherChampion and Stone manager (4) stately gray haired lady that worked for Champion and Stone for 20 years (5) impeccably tailored suit (6) soft, refined voice (10) 3. Her Last Chance
IsabelWhitlea daughter; 7-y-o when father and brother disappeared; married now; moved away (181) long blond hair in ponytail (354) unblinking pale gaze; "Izzy"; woman who gave Ben his orders (355) icy controlling bitch (356)3. Her Last Chance
JanetAvalon's back-up lawyer (45)3. Her Last Chance
Juliebartender at Leone's bar; cute; plump; 20s (85)3. Her Last Chance
Kelliclerk at Alliance Gallery (117)3. Her Last Chance
Joey Leonedid Vincent's yard work; parents owned bar (85)3. Her Last Chance
Ron LevineAvalon's lawyer (45) late 40s; tall; dark; good-looking; soulless lawyer; angular features; coldly assessing eyes (61) Jewish; sense of humor; Armani suit; handsome (63) tall; dark (70) rock solid self-confidence (72) had to be best at everything; restless energy; male arrogance (77) 3. Her Last Chance
John Adam "Johnny" LewisVincent arrested; sentenced to 12 years at Rockview for stealing antiques (284) John Adam Lewis (289)3. Her Last Chance
Shai LewisVincent's stalker; tall; dark hair cut short like a man's (283) Johnny's sister (284)3. Her Last Chance
Tío MannyClaudia's uncle (260) 3. Her Last Chance
Detective MathersonPhiladelphia PD; competent; 50s; pale eyes; thinning brown hair (4)3. Her Last Chance
McConnellman Claudia killed in Dallas (172)3. Her Last Chance
Russ NobleSheridan Expeditions tour guide; in Peru (124)4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
OpheliaBen's older sister (123) married a Whitlea cousin (181) 3. Her Last Chance
Little Otissmall time thief (33)3. Her Last Chance
RichieAlliance employee (113) 3. Her Last Chance
Vanessa Sharpton(92): blond (90) frail; neurotic; K. Valaj's girlfriend (91) not a good liar; feelings ridiculously transparent (96) submissive; subdued; good-girl sensibilities (105) Mia's friend and co-worker for 5 years (178) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
ShaundaBen's receptionist / bodyguard; dressed severely in basic black and brown; chocolate brown skin (44) little round glasses (45) hair pulled back in complicated twist; looked like librarian; tall; elegant; lethal; did not do casual at work (46) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Ben Sheridan(16): thinks he's above the law; stinking rich; powerful friends around the world; owns travel agency that is a cover for bunch of mercenaries (9) heir to Ross Sheridan; wealthy (47) CEO of Sheridan Expeditions; Big Dog of Avalon (49) divorced 10-y-a (122) perfectly trimmed hair; perpetual 5 o'clock shadow (336) same height as Vincent; intimidating (337)4. One Way Out (m)
1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Ross SheridanBen's father (47) 3. Her Last Chance
Ms. StoneChampion and Stone gallery owner (6)3. Her Last Chance
Stevekeeping eye on Claudia for Vincent (67)3. Her Last Chance
William "Will" Tiernay[Hero of Book 2] incident with factory bomb in Boston (8) Avalon operative (41) strong affect on women; ex-detective; Ben assigned him cold case of Italian girl's murder and Whitlea's murder; smart; patient; thorough; could be trusted to keep a low profile; made game of squeezing in uncovered items on expense account (50) better than average skills at bending the rules (176) long muscular body; dark hair (177) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Kostandin Valajdied in Boston (40)2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Rainert von LahrBen's archnemesis; German; eluding Avalon and law for 15 years; thief and purveyor of the stolen, the looted and the forged; made fine art of disappearing into thin air, leaving nothing behind but the occasional betrayed lover or corpse (49) raised by strict conservative parents (98) sniper in German army (The Bundeswehr) (101) 4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Baron Whitleasecond baronet; disappeared in Nazi-occupied Poland in 1939; didn't die in car crash in France (182) 3. Her Last Chance
Mrs. Whitleagave Ben his orders (250)3. Her Last Chance
Arthur [Whitlea]Gareth's father; killed (48)2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Gareth [Whitlea]Ben's friend; 20-y-o; killed (48)2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Stuart WilcoxSheridan Expeditions tour guide; in Peru (124) big man; early 30s; fit; alert; wife; 3 kids; parents; sister (354)3. Her Last Chance

Locations, Organizations "Her Last Chance"
Location / Organization Description
Alliance Galleryrobbed few months ago (32) owned by collectors who specialized in antique needlework; description of location (111)
Augustmonth in which story takes place (14)
Avalon Claudia's employer (11) Seattle based (12) art database as early as 1920 (17) secretive organization of mercenaries who hunted down art thieves, looters, and forgers around the world (47) Ben Sheridan poses as head man (49)
Bellefleursmall town outside Dallas; Claudia's family lived here (258)
Champion and Stoneart gallery in Philadelphia's tourist heavy Old City; theft brings Vincent and Claudia to investigate (2)
Columbia, South CarolinaVincent must go talk to local prosecutor re fraud case (57)
Dallassetting location; Claudia had to travel to Dallas on another case (256)
Elliott BayBen could see from his office window (47)
Greek Corinthian helmetitem stolen from Champion and Stone (10)
Leone's barbar Vincent frequented (85)
Londonsetting location; where von Lahr currently residing (90)
Marseillewhere von Lahr ran when operation went wrong (342)
Philadelphiaprimary setting in book (1)
Rittenhouse SquareClaudia went to meet Digger (109)
Seattlesetting location; location of Sheridan Expeditions (44)
Sheridan Expeditionsin 3-story building overlooking Puget Sound; log cabin style; international adventure tour agency; rustic theme carried over into interior (46) Ben Sheridan's Seattle-based company (49)
West St. AubryWhitlea home (181)

"Her Last Chance" Quotations
42Trusting and believing in his sense of right and wrong, of justice and fairness, was the only way he could get by in this crazy, [screwed]-up world.   (Vincent)
138"I'm not going to apologize for my belief in basic ethics, or for trying to hold on to it as best I can in a world that doesn't seem to care much about anything."   (Vincent)
171"You believe your peers share your code of honor.   You trust too easily, . . . and it's too bad people like you are the exception rather than the norm."   (Claudia)

"Michele Albert -- Her Last Chance" Review and Information Links
Rated Posted Site Notes, Comments, Etc.
---- Michele Albert's WebsiteAuthor (Michele Albert is Michelle Jerott's pseudonym)
---- Michele Albert's FacebookAuthor (Michele Albert is Michelle Jerott's pseudonym)
---- Michele Albert's Wikipediamini biography
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C+ / warm03-24-2010All About Romance--Jean Wan // interesting arguments
4.25 average{4 reviews}Amazonas of: May 13, 2013 // 3 horribly vague and detail-less reviews
4.45 average{my review}Barnes & Nobleas of: May 13, 2013
----Fantastic FictionList of Michelle Jerott's Books
----Fantastic FictionList of Michele Albert's Books
----Fict FactList of Books In "The Avalon Investigations Series"
----Fiction DBList of Michelle Jerott's Books
----Fiction DBList of Michele Albert's Books
3.46 average{9 reviews}Good Readsas of: May 13, 2013
3.28 average{9 ratings}Library Thingas of: May 13, 2013 // all duplicate entries
Grade: 88--Mrs. Gigglesexcellent review // good details
3.70 average{6 ratings}Paperback Swapas of: May 12, 2013
4.50 / hot03-30-2010RT {Romantic Times} Book Reviews2010 Romantic Suspense Nominee
3.0003-23-2010Rundpinne{gr2} // received review copy // poor job // {does not like steamy romance}
4.45 average{my review}Shelfarias of: May 13, 2013
4.4505-12-2013Wolf Bear Does Booksshorter post on Amazon, Fiction DB, Good Reads, Library Thing, Shelfari

Notes:
♥   Disclaimer:   I Purchased This Book
♥   Very Subjective Rating
♣   Will add your Her Last Chance review link to table, just ask

Saturday, May 11, 2013

Michele Albert -- Tough Enough

Michele Albert -- Tough Enough

Rated: ♥ ♥ ♥ . ♥   {3.85}
Action: ♠♠♠♠ / Emotion: ♣♣ / Romance: ♥♥ / Sensuous: ♦♦.♦ / Suspense: ♠♠♠.♠
Action: 4.0 / Emotion: 2.0 / Romance: 2.0 / Sensuous: 2.75 / Suspense: 3.5  //  Laughter: 0 / Tears: 0

Setting:     Boston, Massachusetts
                  Zàkynthos (Zante), Greece
Era:           Present Day [2007]
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Having read all the books included under The Avalon Investigations Series of Michele Albert's book list, would like to divide this selection into two different series; naming them: {1} The Pre-Avalon Series and {2} The Avalon Investigations Series.

Have enjoyed reading Michele Albert's The Avalon Investigation Series books back to back.   Tough Enough is the second book in this series featuring agents of a firm called Avalon.   For those who like to have a picture of where an author is headed when she begins writing a series, the note that Albert writes at the end of this book about Avalon will be of definite interest.   Albert should be commended for coming up with a unique company and creating a very clever way to tie its characters together.

Avalon is a company that began over a hundred years ago.   It's sole purpose is to address an area of law enforcement that takes second chair to heinous crimes -- it investigates crimes regarding stolen art and looted antiquities.   It is headed by an invisible figurehead who finances the operations and issues instructions to Ben Sheridan, who is the CEO of Avalon's cover company, Sheridan Expeditions, a thriving adventure travel agency in Seattle.   The biggest surprise about these Avalon agents is their manner of catching the bad guy.   These agents have no legal jurisdiction, thus, they can take measures forbidden by law enforcement officers.   They do, however, work closely with law enforcement so that when the crime is exposed, arrests can be made.   Another unique manner of resolution for Avalon agents is that they must disappear into the woodwork and a cover story must be created to explain why a shootout, or an explosion, or a kidnapping never happened.

In her usual capable manner, Albert very successfully draws a reader's immediate interest in not only William "Will" Tiernay, the "tough enough" Avalon agent, who seems to be known for his penchant for wearing expensive designer suits and hitting on gorgeous women as well as his talents as an accomplished investigator, but also continues painting the picture of Ben Sheridan, his boss.   Really liked the opening scene that Albert used to reveal a lot of information and yet still leave holes that inspire an aura of intrigue as she paints a fun picture of the interaction between Ben, Will, and the two woman who serve as Ben's bodyguards / secretaries, Ellie and Shaunda.

It was a wonderful addition to the book (and the series) that Ben was given a brief point of view voice in this book.   Albert is doing a phenomenal job of inspiring great interest in Ben as the man directing his agents, but also as a possible hero of his own book.   You cannot help but want to know so much more about this strong, conflicted, dedicated character.   How did Ben come to be not only the head of his own company, but to work for the unknown man who was the true authority.   Painting this fleeting picture of Ben generates great interest and provides the potential for future books.

Will heads off to Boston to investigate a possible theft of pieces from the Eudoxia collection currently owned by Malcolm "Mal" Toller, who is having copies of this collection created by Haddington Reproductions so he can sell the originals to the "Met" (Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York).   The most important piece in the collection is a cursed reliquary.   [A reliquary is a container where religious relics are stored or displayed (especially relics of saints).]   But the biggest cause of concern in the case is that Rainert von Lahr, one of the most wanted art thieves worldwide and a man Avalon agents had been actively trying to apprehend for the past fifteen years, may be involved.

The romance in the story that is supposed to walk side-by-side with the suspenseful plot is that Will is not going to use an alias for this assignment because one of Hugh Haddington's reproduction assistants is none other than the woman who broke his heart in college, Mia Shaeffer Dolan.   Could not help but feel a bit sorry for Will to be blindsided by seeing Mia when he walked into Haddington Reproductions to begin his investigation while posing as a journalist doing an article for Antiquities Review Magazine, but Ben didn't think Will would accept the assignment if Will knew Mia was involved.

The romance aspect of the story is where Albert totally dropped the ball.   Mia is not only shocked to see her college lover, the man that she betrayed, standing beside her boss, but learns that Will is going to be spending time asking questions about a subject he knew nothing about back when she knew him twelve years ago -- art and antiquities.   As expected, the lust and interest is still strong between these two characters who loved and lost, but what is disappointing is that Albert miserably failed to develop the emotional angst that must have permeated these two characters as they each dealt with that life-altering incident.

Instead Albert featured the sexual aspect of Will and Mia's relationship.   Not only did Will and Mia not even make it out to their first dinner before they decided to renew their acquaintance with each other in a bout of passionate, hot monkey-sex, but they seemed to avoid discussing their feelings about what happened to them twelve years ago.   Yes, it was easy to understand that Will and Mia would have difficulty when it came to abstaining from sex since they were still drawn to one another, but Albert made these scenes come across as unfeeling because the emotional connection was missing.   Whenever he and Mia made love, Will would remind Mia that he was leaving at the end of his assignment and Mia would feel bad that she had once betrayed him and ruined her chances with him.

To be brutally honest, Mia is a very weakly-developed heroine.   Albert did a great job of revealing that she was apparently a gorgeous woman, full of energy, fun to be around, and stood up for herself.   Mia was very typically selfish and immature in her youth.   Mia apparently regretted throwing away her fiancé waiting for her back home in Ohio for a fling with Lorenz when she went to study art in Venice, but Albert never once established the emotional connection that revealed that Mia had deep feelings about her actions.   All Mia was able to give Will for an incident that sounded very painful from his point of view was a simple, little apology twelve years later.

So instead of developing the romance and emotional healing that Will and Mia should have been experiencing as they talked about their failed relationship, Albert instead concentrated on the suspenseful fact that Will gave his adversaries an advantage in their efforts to steal the Eudoxia Reliquary.   He revealed Mia was his weakness.   An advantage that was used to entertain readers with the kind of exciting action-packed, 'the good guys face off against the bad guys' adventure that is necessary to any Romantic Suspense novel.

Mia's friend and co-worker Vanessa Sharpton is a very important secondary character that is given a short point of view voice that added greatly to the interest and suspense of the story.   Will finds out rather quickly that Vanessa and her younger boyfriend of nine months, Kostandin "Kos" Vulaj, are the thieves he has been sent to investigate.   Again, Albert presents her skills at writing a suspenseful story and including details to explain how a "good" girl raised in a dysfunctional home can justify her actions by breaking the law with the man who loves her, but she failed to develop it to a depth that brought tears or laughter to the story.

Could not help but be impressed that Albert so understands the nuances of the human psychological makeup that she took an obvious low-life thug like Kostandin and painted a picture of his life that provided moments of understanding and sympathy for his plight.   There were two particular references that showed that while Kos may have made the wrong decisions in his efforts to escape his ties to the Albanian Mafia, his acceptance of Vanessa far superseded Mia's tendency to fix Vanessa.

"She told me that she couldn't be herself around you, because you were always telling her how she should act and think, making her feel like there was something about her that needed fixing."   (Kos, page 251)

"But, she isn't you and doesn't think like you.   She is her own person and doesn't need fixing.   She just needed someone who could accept her and take care of her, who would give her love and accept her love in return." (Kos, page 251)

So now Vanessa had given Kostandin Vulaj the role of hero that he needed to play, the chance to style himself as a good guy who was merely misunderstood.   In turn, he made Vanessa feel important and valuable, desired and loved, everything she'd hungered for all her life.   (Mia, page 252)

Albert is not without talent at weaving many different threads into her stories.   But she has failed to entertain readers with her ability to connect them to her characters emotionally as she begins to weave those threads into events that can be carried over into her future novels.   Albert came close to creating that identifying connection in this book by presenting two very emotional dialogues in the book between Will and Vanessa, and also, Kos and Mia, in which Albert very passionately described the thought processes that eventually resulted in revealing reasons why Kos and Vanessa felt breaking the law was justified in their case.

Avalon's arch-villain, Rainert von Lahr, is given two small point of view scenes during the telling of Will and Mia's story to reveal a degree of humaneness in his nature.   Naturally, Albert is using these scenes to generate interest for continued readership in this series -- and she succeeds.   One has to wonder where Albert is headed with this idea because, after all, in the Land of Romance, the good guy is always supposed to catch the bad guy in the end.

Although her writing still appeals to the reader inside me, for some reason, Albert's books seemed to have evolved from deeply-developed, emotionally-detailed characters that a reader can engage with to individuals whose emotions are hazy as they act out the scenes that drive the plot of the story.   And while I am anxious to pick up the next book in this series and continue reading, there is yet hope that Albert's next book will be another great read.

Tough Enough, the second book in The Avalon Investigation Series is an enjoyable read and showcases Albert's talent as she spins a tale of romance and intrigue, but it is not a top of the line Romantic Suspense novel.   Although easy to read and entertaining, this book failed to generate the feeling of trust from a broken love being rebuilt between Will and Mia and did not inspire nail-biting suspense.
--Vonda M. Reid (Friday, December 14, 2012 : 8:33 p.m.)     [294]

Books In The Series: "The Pre-Avalon Series"
# Date Title Hero Heroine
01.09-1998Absolute TroubleJulien Langlois; stripperDulcinea "Dulcie" Quinn; former cop
02.10-2002Getting Her ManDr. Jack Austin; archaeology professorDiana Belmaine; Private Investigator
03.09-2003Off LimitsRobert "Bobby" Michael Halloran; detectiveEmma Frey; homicide detective
04.03-2005One Way OutDr. Alex Martinell; paleontologist; professorCassie Parker Ashton; treasure hunter

Books In The Series: "The Avalon Investigations Series"
# Date Title Hero Heroine
01.05-2006 Hide In Plain SightGriffith "Grif" Laughton; Avalon OperativeFiona Kennedy; bookstore owner
02.04-2007Tough EnoughWilliam "Will" Tiernay; Avalon OperativeMia Shaeffer Dolan; art restorer
03.03-2010Her Last ChanceVincent DeLuca; FBI Special AgentClaudia Cruz; Avalon Operative
04.hoping. . . Ben Sheridan; Avalon CEO. . .
05.hoping. . . Russ Noble; Sheridan Expeditions. . .

Characters Found In "Tough Enough"
Character Description Also In
William "Will" Tiernay[Hero] Avalon Investigations Operative; talents: B&E, running a con on a con, acting (1) Hugo Boss suit (3) man of a hundred faces (7) fluent in Spanish; passable French and Italian reading skills (12) ex-cop (13) lone wolf in sheep's clothing (15) big Ohio lad (17) straw jaw and cheekbones (23) firm, full mouth; dark eyes beneath impossible dark lashes (24) heart-stoppingly handsome; dark looks; broad shoulders; harsher lines to face (55) wide shoulders; lean; powerful (82) sharply defined lines of muscles; scorpion tattoo on upper biceps (83) toned, hard body; narrow hips met powerful thighs (85) radiated power and self-confidence (116) filled entire space with energy and vitality (117) Seattle Police Department Detective until 3-y-a (124) lean, hard-muscled physique (152) mercenary (207) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Mia Shaeffer Dolan[Heroine] love of Will's life in college (5) Haddington's assistant; British citizen (9) inherited Mother's exotic Maltese darkness; father an American (17) a selfish, immature girl (19) mouthy; stands up for herself (21) jewelry her area of expertise; working on the jewelry in the Eudoxia collection (22) beautiful; generous curves (25) shoulder-length curling dark hair; wide, dreamy-soft brown eyes dominated her heart-shaped face; single dimple in right cheek; full mouth that smiled easily (26) impulsive; ambitious; resorted to thievery (45) lost heart to Will at 18 (49) 34-y-o (81) energy sparking through groups of people energized her (186) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
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AnnaRovena's 5-y-o daughter (126)2. Tough Enough
Ariworking with Kos (123) 2. Tough Enough (m)
Maria BalestriniBen wanted Will to look into Maria's death as a personal favor (7) murdered in July 1943, case never solved (13) long black hair; pretty smile; wistful dreaminess in dark eyes (12) knew man who disappeared in 1939 (13)2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Caligula[Animal] Mia's ferrett (73)2. Tough Enough
Claudia Cruz[Heroine of Book 3] Avalon agent (143) everything about her irritated Will; tall; slender (173) brassy short hair; dark eyes; full lips; man-eater Technicolor; floral perfume; ex-cop (174) left force under shady circumstances; smart; ruthless (175) orange-red hair; dusky skin (253) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Philip Dolan(67): Mia's ex-husband; adorably absent-minded (16) conservationist at British Museum; met at Louvre; married couple years (51) 2. Tough Enough (m)
ElizabethMia's sister; went to USC; mutinous streak of spunk; married dentist; two boys (163)2. Tough Enough (m)
EllieBen's executive secretary; Barbie-doll blond, blue eyes; kick-ass hot; pink toenails (2) gray leggings; baby pink tee; ponytail (3) girlie cuteness; natural flirt; typist; nose-breaker; Ben's bodyguard (4) 1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Hugh Haddingtonused to work for Facsimile Service of the British Museum; left 4-y-a to start own company in U.S. (7) loves being center of attention; standard baggy black plants, black shirt and ever-present black fedora; deep voice (23) droopy browns of a basset hound (29) 48-y-o over-achiever; very good at restoration and reproduction (43) cheerful; energetic (63) 2. Tough Enough
Jonathana guy Mia dated (16)2. Tough Enough (m)
Kathymarried Sam; Will and Mia's college friends; 4 kids (193)2. Tough Enough (m)
Mrs. KinskiMia's neighbor (291)2. Tough Enough (m)
[Griffith "Grif"] Laughton[Hero of Book 1] left Avalon (11) 1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough (m)
LorenzMia's ex-boyfriend (19)2. Tough Enough (m)
MathieuMia's ex-boyfriend (19)2. Tough Enough (m)
Sergeant Detective Doug MorrisBoston PD; navy suit; 10 pounds overweight; uncombed graying dark hair (107)2. Tough Enough
Nolanthe Art Guy; professor; provided crash courses on Art to Avalon rookies, often on short notice and at odd hours (5) Nolan (6) 2. Tough Enough (m)
RovenaVulaj's aunt (127) born into Albanian organized crime; married in Greek equivalent (131) beautiful, mature woman; thick dark hair; lush lips; lush breasts (132)2. Tough Enough
Sammarried Kathy; Will and Mia's college friends; 4 kids (193)2. Tough Enough (m)
Vanessa SharptonHaddington's assistant; British citizen (9) erring talent for choosing losers and deadbeats; pale coloring; blue eyes; with Kos for 9 months (17) doesn't stand up for herself (21) working on the reliquary (22) tall; blond (26) nervousness typical of the shy and awkward (26) trained in art; can reproduce anything in paint or inlay from Neolithic to pop culture (31) quiet type; thin fingers (33) 36-y-o; born and raised in London; trained at University of London (43) came from family of substance abuse (52) pawn; weak; gullible (208) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Shaunda(4): Ben's receptionist; strong, lean lines to muscles; smooth black skin (1) narrow oval glasses; oval reserve; kick-ass hot (2)2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Ben SheridanCEO of Sheridan Expeditions (2) faint lines crinkled at corners of dark eyes (3) short, dark hair; rich; top dog; trained with Ellie 3 times a week (4) hard-edged power; a thrum of controlled violence, which came from a life of spent looking too deeply into the darkness, of doing what should not have to be done (13) 4. One Way Out (m)
1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
SusanMia's sister; charming; spoiled; going to Ohio State (163)2. Tough Enough (m)
Mark Swantonman Will hired to drive Mia; older; looked like someone wouldn't want to confront in a dark alley; graying hair (236)2. Tough Enough
Malcolm "Mal" Toller: lots of money; lords it over Boston law firm; currently playing publisher for men's magazine he bought from an Italian corporation (6) lecherous prick (22) Malcolm (110) 2. Tough Enough
Rainert von LahrBundeswehr-trained sniper; walked away from promising military career; one of the most wanted art thieves worldwide; Avalon trying to capture the past 15 years (10) usually left a woman behind to take a big fall (11) set up business in Brazil and Venezuela (12) 4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Kostandin "Kos" VulajVanessa's boyfriend; baggage handler at Boston's Logan Airport (92) olive-tinted skin; shoulder-length black hair; alert hazel eyes; extremely handsome (98) came to U.S. 4-y-a from upheaval in Albania, barely able to speak English (100) ties to Albanian Mafia (108) hair-trigger temper (109) Rovena's favorite nephew (127) arrogant; dark, sulky good looks; intensely dark eyes; rotten core (249) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance (m)
Sir Arthur WhitleaFourth Baronet of West St. Aubry: disappeared (329) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Gareth WhitleaSir Arthur's son; disappeared (329) 2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
  (m) = mentioned 

Locations, Organizations Found In "Tough Enough"
Location / Organization Description
Antiquities Review MagazineWill posing as reporter for this magazine (23)
Avalon Investigationsoperation Will worked for; no one knew identity of man who gave Ben orders and financed his small private army of mercenaries with an eye for art (8) began hundred years ago (39)
Bostonwhere Mia and Vanessa were currently working (17)
Curse of the Eudoxia Reliquarywoe and misfortune to all who touch (22)
Haddington ReproductionsHugh Haddington's company; Toller having reproductions of his art made by Haddington Reproductions (7) Will to investigate Haddington and his 2 assistants (8)
Metropolitan "Met" Museum of ArtNew York' most prestigious art museum (8)
Seattlehome base for Avalon Investigations / Sheridan Expeditions
Sheridan Expeditionslocated in Seattle; thriving adventure travel agency; overlooked Puget Sound (1)
"Tough Enough""Oh, you're tough enough." (Ellie to Will)
Venice, Italy Epilogue (331)
Zàkynthos (Zante), Greecelocation where von Lahr was residing (126)

"Tough Enough" Quotations
226Envy, resentment, anger . . . they helped keep guilt at bay.   Mia, always telling her what she should do, always doing things "for Vanessa" without ever asking if Vanessa wanted them done, or thinking they might not be what she wanted or even needed.   Mia, always trying to mold her into another version of herself without understanding that it wasn't possible.   (Vanessa)
251"She told me that she couldn't be herself around you, because you were always telling her how she should act and think, making her feel like there was something about her that needed fixing."   (Kos)
251"But, she isn't you and doesn't think like you.   She is her own person and doesn't need fixing.   She just needed someone who could accept her and take care of her, who would give her love and accept her love in return."   (Kos)
252It was clear now why they loved each other.   Both of them needful, feeding off each other, trying to fill the empty places inside that couldn't be filled.   (Mia)
271"You haven't lived my life.   People like you have opportunities, you have choices and never think about how lucky you are.   I never had anything but poverty and a homeland torn apart by war.   I come to America, and I'm looked down upon because I'm not one of you.   I'm just another foreigner, stealing your jobs and living off your taxes."   (Kos)
274What Will did was important . . . compared with her own complacency, only working to pay the bills, the days simply passing by, month after month, year after year.   (Mia)
294the law didn't work the same for everyone.   (Mia)
rvwMs Albert's greatest success in this story is her ability to make me get all torn up and twisted inside because the good guys and the bad guys aren't so clearly drawn here.   (Mrs. Giggles)

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----Fantastic FictionList of Michelle Jerott's Books
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3.0006-04-2007The Romance Reader--Mary Benn // excellent review with good detail
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Saturday, March 30, 2013

Michele Albert -- Hide In Plain Sight

Michele Albert -- Hide In Plain Sight

Rated: ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ . ♥   {4.15}
Action: ♠♠♠.♠ / Emotion: ♣♣♣.♣ / Romance: ♥♥♥♥.♥ / Sensuous: ♦♦.♦ / Suspense: ♠♠♠
Action: 3.5 / Emotion: 3.5 / Romance: 4.25 / Sensuous: 2.75 / Suspense: 3.0  //  Laughter: 1 / Tears: ½

Setting:     Los Angeles, California
Era:           Present Day [2006]
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Having read all the books included under The Avalon Investigations Series of Michele Albert's book list, would like to divide this selection into two different series; naming them: {1} The Pre-Avalon Series and {2} The Avalon Investigations Series.

Since there is something special about Michele Albert's writing style that appeals to the reader inside me, it should come as no surprise that Hide In Plain Sight, the fifth book in {1} The Pre-Avalon Series and {2} the first book in The Avalon Investigations Series, is another must read for me.   Although this book did not hold quite the same appeal as some of her previous works, it was still an exciting, intriguing, spicy, enjoyable read.

Hide In Plain Sight is just another example of how Albert is able to immediately draw her readers into her books and then hold them spellbound as she weaves a fascinating story about a hunky, alpha hero and a seemingly ordinary, yet apparently brave-hearted heroine.   If one were to write a headline that prefaced this book, it would be: "Legendary Super Agent is Felled by Bookworm During His Mid-Life Crisis."

As in her previous books, the romance aspect of this story carries more weight than the suspenseful nature of the plot.   The introduction of the super-villain, Rainert von Lahr, one of the most notorious art and antiquities thieves in all of Europe adds a new richer flavor of suspense to this book.   In the Prologue, Avalon Agent Griffith "Grif" Laughton is introduced trying to capture von Lahr, but instead is outwitted by this master criminal, who kills three of his team members.   This particular mission continues to haunt Grif five years later at the opening of this book.

Apparently Albert has decided to forego delving deep into the psyche of her characters to inspire an emotional connection to the hero and heroine and to try and write a story full of romance and suspense.   And while creating an aura of romance and suspense around the actions of Grif and Fiona in this book is instrumental in keeping one turning the pages, she did not create as deep an impact in either of these realms as, say, Karen Rose or Suzanne Brockmann.   The suspense was not intense and the romance was unique -- in that Albert took a close look at the true nature of the female psyche when it comes to 'one night stands.'

After her husband, Richard McMahon, has been declared legally dead after driving his car into a fast-running river five years ago, Fiona Kennedy-McMahon is sitting in her bookshop contemplating taking a holiday in the Bahamas because she understands that the scuba diver instructors were easy.   As the rainy day passes and Fiona makes her reservations for her vacation so she can move on with her life, two drop-dead gorgeous men visit Kennedy Antiquarian Books and flirt with her.   So Albert has begun building the suspense by introducing not only the hero to the heroine, but the villain as well.

Albert does a great job of keeping the suspenseful aspect of the story alive when Grif arrives at the bookshop to contract with Fiona to authenticate a fake manuscript by poet and playwright, Christopher "Kit" Marlowe.   Fiona was an expert on Marlowe and was supposed to be the only person who could reveal the coded messages within this manuscript that Richard had created regarding van Lahr's foremost forger and base of operations.   Grif teases Fiona with a short glimpse of the manuscript and then tells her he will return at closing to take her out to dinner.   Albert totally drops the ball with regard to the manuscript.   Instead of letting Fiona again look at the manuscript during their period of hiding, she focused solely on the volatile relationship between Grif and Fiona.

Albert did a great job of when it come to increasing the amount of action and adventure she included in this book, which seems only appropriate since she had phased into a new series featuring a group of mercenaries who are hired to protect stolen art and antiquities -- an aspect of law enforcement that is often overlooked because they must focus their limited resources on murders and other mayhem.   The secretive organization is called Avalon Investigations and the operatives get their orders from Ben Sheridan.

With just a few well-written scenes, in which Albert describes the offices of Sheridan Expeditions (Ben's actual wilderness expedition travel agency) and introduces readers to Ben and his equally fascinating secretary / bodyguard, Ellie.   To say that these two minor, but important secondary characters drew marked and immediate interest is an understatement.   Albert has done a remarkable job of wetting the appetite to inspire a desire to pick up any future books that may reveal more about Ben and the secret organization that he oversees.

Even though Grif was sent by Ben to protect Fiona as they used her as bait to lure the 'impossible to catch' villain from his lair with a fake Marlow manuscript, Hide In Plain Sight, is not so much about catching von Lahr as it is about the redemption of Grif and the re-emergence of Fiona back into life.   [Warning: most readers will not like the following interpretation regarding Fiona's reaction to Grif's revelation that he was not actually a lawyer, but a secret agent.]

Women are a fickle lot -- and Fiona is no exception.   She takes a gorgeous, handsome, charming man she just met back to her home to end her five years of abstinence.   Fiona even tells Grif:

"I want to be honest with you, Griffith.   I'm not looking for love or romance or commitment.   I'm just looking for a night of hot, sweaty, wonderful sex."   (Fiona, page 87)

Then when Fiona learns that's Griffith's entry into her life was false, she hauled off and hit him in the mouth, saying:

"You bastard.   All along you lied to me.   You used me!   (Fiona, page 148)

Fiona was so typically female.   She lied to herself, and was okay with using a man when it was her idea, but when she learned she had never been in control, she flew into a fury.   But, then, again, this also pointed out that Fiona was one of those women who could not do casual sex -- she let her emotions get all tangled up in the actions.

she wasn't the kind of woman who had sex with a total stranger.   (Fiona, page 72)

"How does it feel to use people?   Or do you just not care?   It must be so amusing, watching people make such fools of themselves.   What I might be thinking or feeling never mattered to you.   None of what happened meant anything to you, did it?"   (Fiona, page 171)

This book is peppered with hot, sensual, fiery, scenes in which Albert reveals her talent as a writer who knows how to pen powerful sex scenes.   She knows the words to use that inspire heat, interest and sizzle as readers enter into the world of Grif and Fiona as they each try to prove they are in control of what is happening between them.

Albert displays her skills at creating realistic characters by introducing the confusion and conflict within Fiona as she is forced to deal with them when Grif must take her to a safe house.   She is attracted to Grif.   She is furious with Grif.   She wants to hate him.   She wants to love him.   She wants to leave him.   She wants to stay with him.   But what she finally comes to realize after they spend time confronting one another in the safe house, was that she believed in Grif -- and then tells him so.

"I think you're wrong about people not believing in you." . . .   "I believe in you."   (Fiona, page 231)

"I'm not blind or stupid, Griffith -- though I've been pathologically naïve these last two days.   I don't exactly trust you, but I believe in you.   . . ."   (Fiona, page 232)

"Now all you have to do is believe in yourself.   If you want something more out of life, make it happen."   (Fiona, page 232)

This is where Albert fails to measure up when it comes to character development.   She has created this phenomenally charming, charismatic, super agent.   Yes, readers watch Grif as he begins to take note of his life choices as he spends time with Fiona in the safe house.   He obviously has a strong sense of right and wrong and wants to win (at all costs), but Albert failed to build his history.   Why had he failed to contact any of his family in ten years?   And why did not one of them even care?   There was such potential to expand Grif's character and create such a deep emotional connection that when he had his visit with Ben Sheridan in Seattle, the reader would be grabbing for Kleenex instead of just feeling sad.

"remember rule number one: Get the job done, no matter what.   It's the only rule people like us live by."   (Grif to fellow agent, Perry, page 12)

Sitting in the soft light of this bedroom, in front of her dresser mirror, he had a good look at himself and didn't like what he saw.   (Grif, page 86)

There was something about her that had him wondering what it would be like to have a life like this.   To have a place of his own, a place of peace and serenity, of warmth.   (Grif, page 94)

. . . even if it meant she was a sentimental idiot , she'd sensed the weary loneliness of someone who'd taken a good look at his life, didn't like what he saw, and didn't believe in himself enough to change.   (Fiona, page 296)

Probably the reason it was so easy to identify with Fiona was because she felt so ordinary.   Again, Albert failed to develop the emotional angst that Fiona must have experienced when she dealt with her husband's jealously, betrayal and death that led to a sandal that forced her to leave the world of academia.   In fact, this scandal was mentioned in passing as if it carried no weight in the world of Fiona.   Instead, Fiona just comes across as a quiet, little bookworm who is brave enough to take a handsome stranger home and then haul off and belt him because wasn't her prince charming after all.

Albert gave Rainert von Lahr a point of view voice in this book.   What was particularly surprising about the development of this arch-villain was the layers that Albert began to give to von Lahr.   Rainert had previously been painted with a brush filled with a solid color of cold-bloodedness.   Now, however, Albert begins painting other colors into his personality -- delving into the reasons for his actions and that he didn't so much kill for the joy of killing but because of {1} expediency, {2} the desire to prove his superiority, {3} to ensure his safety, and {4} to promote his lifestyle.

Hide In Plain Sight is an easy, enjoyable, entertaining read.   Albert kept one turning the pages, by providing the necessary facets that make for a great read. {1} Grif, a skilled super agent who was charming, suave, debonair, and was having to come to grips with his life choices. {2} Fiona, the proverbial 'girl next door' who was leaving her cocoon to offer solace and compassion to a man who betrayed her. {3} Bouts of action and adventure that added the much needed excitement into the plot. {4} A degree of suspense regarding Avalon Investigations, it's operatives, it's leader, and it's number one villain. {5} Although there was an emotional connection to Grif and Fiona, the intensity did not reach that special level that Albert usually provides to make her books so memorable. {6} The romance factor was prevalent as Grif and Fiona immediately gave in to their attraction . . . and then fought about the feelings that arose for the remainder of the book.   {7} The sensuality was, typically, hot and spicy. {8} The secondary characters, while minimally developed, added interest and inspired interest in future books.   Because Albert's writing style holds such a strong appeal for me, I am anxious to read the next book in the series.
--Vonda M. Reid (Wednesday, December 12, 2012 : 9:30 p.m.)     [293]   //   Revised: (Sunday, March 31, 2013 : 12:36 p.m.)

Books In The Series: "The Pre-Avalon Series"
# Date Title Hero Heroine
01.09-1998Absolute TroubleJulien Langlois; stripperDulcinea "Dulcie" Quinn; former cop
02.10-2002Getting Her ManDr. Jack Austin; archaeology professorDiana Belmaine; Private Investigator
03.09-2003Off LimitsRobert "Bobby" Michael Halloran; detectiveEmma Frey; homicide detective
04.03-2005One Way OutDr. Alex Martinell; paleontologist; professorCassie Parker Ashton; treasure hunter

Books In The Series: "The Avalon Investigations Series"
# Date Title Hero Heroine
01.05-2006 Hide In Plain SightGriffith "Grif" Laughton; Avalon OperativeFiona Kennedy; bookstore owner
02.04-2007Tough EnoughWilliam "Will" Tiernay; Avalon OperativeMia Shaeffer Dolan; art restorer
03.03-2010Her Last ChanceVincent DeLuca; FBI Special AgentClaudia Cruz; Avalon Operative
04.hoping. . . Ben Sheridan; Avalon CEO. . .
05.hoping. . . Russ Noble; Sheridan Expeditions. . .

Characters Found In "Hide In Plain Sight"
Character Description Also In
Griffith "Grif" Laughton[Hero] shot in back by 14-y-o in Al-Fajr; nearly died (18) loved Seattle; hated LA (20) drop-dead gorgeous (33) tall; dark hair; friendly, "brainy guy" good looks; round wire glasses; genuine WWII-era flight jacket; broad shoulders; blue eyes (34) friendly wholesome charm (39) rich, chest-dip laugh (45) grandfather's jacket (55) aura of excitement, adventure, mystery and danger (67) amazing, clear, light, direct eyes; scent of leather and spiced cologne; uncanny piece of work (70) dark, finely arched brows (72) from Gary, Indiana (73) faint line of hair on belly (88) whipcord lean build; muscles sharply defined but not overdeveloped (107) scars (119) mercenary (159) with Avalon 15 years; 19-y-o when joined; 34-y-o; joined Army out of high school (180) moved with confidence and strength (181) 1. Hide In Plain Sight
Fiona Kennedy-McMahon[Heroine] cute little redhead with lots of freckles; genius when comes to Marlowe (17) sells antique books out of old Victorian house near USC (18) 36-y-o (24) Irish accent; transplanted Belfast girl (29) no longer used McMahon; no longer in academics (36) thick, dark red hair; pale skin dusted with freckles (51) brainy; respectable; practical; refined (77) trim body (83) small breasts; long hair in French braid (84) fine bones; slender; redhead's pale skin (88) vanilla perfume (94) aura of warmth and softness; full spectrum of red hues in her hair; green eyes (95) met Richard when sophomore in college; married year later; disappeared shortly after 10th anniversary (112) academic career took off (163) everything about her honest and real (226) pretty; smart; warm; funny; tenacity of a pit bull (258) 2. Getting Her Man
3. Off Limits
4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
. . . . . . . . .
Ibrahim al-Shadri[Brief Appearance] [prologue] member of notorious al-Shadri clan (4)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Yousef al-Shadri[Brief Appearance] [prologue] Ibrahim's nephew; member of notorious al-Shadri clan (4)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Cassie [Parker Ashton][Brief Appearance] [Heroine of Pre-Avalon Book 2] blunt; Fiona's friend (42) Wyoming (180) outgoing; brassy; stubborn (220) 2. Getting Her Man
3. Off Limits (m)
4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
Travis [Ashton][Brief Appearance] Cassie's son; handsome; junior (335) 3. Off Limits (m)
4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
Jack Austin[Brief Appearance] [Hero of Pre-Avalon Book 2] born charmer; Diana's husband (334)2. Getting Her Man
3. Off Limits (e)
4. One Way Out (m)
1. Hide in Plain Sight (m)
Diana [Belmaine] [Austin][Brief Appearance] [Heroine of Pre-Avalon Book 2] just got married (24) P.I. in New Orleans (179) cool; clever; elegant (220) blond bombshell (337) 2. Getting Her Man
3. Off Limits (e)
4. One Way Out (m)
1. Hide in Plain Sight (m)
Bouchet[One Appearance] [prologue] Avalon lookout; knifed (14)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Bressler[One Appearance] came to bookstore to get manuscript; short; dark hair; crooked nose (132) 1. Hide In Plain Sight
Diva[Brief Appearances] Avalon agent; tiny brunette (8) had Latino or darker Mediterranean blood; olive tinted skin; angular face; greenish brown eyes; short, feathery hair; scar across her left eyebrow; scar on lip; attractive in a scary way (290) 1. Hide In Plain Sight
Ellie[Brief Appearance] Ben's longtime bodyguard and secretary; young; blond; athletic suburbanite (300)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Faustus[Brief Appearances] Fiona's cat; huge; pure black; male (25) left tom-catting ways behind; snobby; contrary; lazy (26)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Annamari Hakkinen[Brief Appearance] [prologue] von Lahr's lover (2) long legs; big bust; blue eyes; von Lahr's liaison (1)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Bobby Halloran[Brief Appearance] [Hero of Pre-Avalon Book 3] Diana's friend; New Orleans detective; good looking (341)1. Absolute Trouble
2. Getting Her Man
3. Off Limits
1. Hide In Plain Sight
Oliver Hanson[No Appearance] smart opportunist; negotiating with von Lahr (102)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Kemal[No Appearance] Avalon agent in Iraq (19)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Kurt[Brief Appearance] [prologue] local cop (11) bartender; bald head; massive shoulders eliminated his neck; curling handlebar mustache; looked like turn of the century circus strongman (2)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Louisa Lau[No Appearance] an acquaintance of Fiona's (296)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Liebowitz[Brief Appearance] [prologue] Avalon agent; red hair (10)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Lynne[Brief Appearance] Sheridan Expeditions receptionist (314)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Christopher "Kit" Marlowe[Actual Historical Character / No Appearance] Fiona an expert on his work; poet; playwright; provocateur; Fiona's first crush (38)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Alex Martinelli[Brief Appearance] [Hero of Pre-Avalon Book 4] Fiona talked about Alex and Cassie (212) Cassie's fiancé; rough around the edges (334)4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight (m)
Richard McMahon[No Appearance] Fiona's husband; legally declared dead; ran his car into fast-running river 5-y-a (24) 'creeping around the dark' type; not dead (50) spineless little bookworm (50) struggling to attain tenure; lackluster research; caught falsifying data and stealing research (163)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Russ Noble[No Appearance] worked for Cassie; for Sheridan Expeditions (322) good looking; dark hair; Native American ancestry (338)4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Noonie[Brief Appearances] Avalon rookie; leaving New York to help (52) young; dark hair (141) 1. Hide In Plain Sight
Wyatt [Parker][Brief Appearance] Cassie's brother; rough around the edges (334)4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
Perry[Brief Appearance] [prologue] new Avalon agent (8)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Ramirez[One Appearance] [prologue] Avalon lookout; shot (14)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Rebeka[One Appearance] call girl; black hair; olive skin (79) von Lahr paid for her for the night; impressive breasts; smelled nice; pretty; attentive (80) 1. Hide In Plain Sight
Rico[No Appearance] Avalon agent in Amsterdam (20) 1. Hide In Plain Sight
Ben Sheridan[Secondary Character] Grif's boss (2) gravelly voice; tall; rugged looking; dark hair; disorganized desk (301) tall; rangy; dark hair; shrewd dark eyes; kind of comfortable good looks that wouldn't threaten other men but fascinated women; late 30s, early 40s, etc. (311) unreadable eyes; politely attentive (312) more dangerous than he looked (313)4. One Way Out (m)
1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance
Balthasar Sherman[Brief Appearance] Patrolman; former marine; deep black skin; shaved head; goatee; build of a professional wrestler (286)1. Hide In Plain Sight
Rainert von Lahr[Major Secondary Character] German (2) one of the most notorious art and antiquities thieves in all of Europe (3) tall; blond; most beautiful man Fiona had ever seen; voice, a smooth rich tone; white-blond; blue-eyed good looks; well-groomed; handsome; radiated sexuality (28) untouchably perfect (34) Aryan handsome (71) master criminal; operating 20 years; ruthless; smart; very dangerous; specializes in antiquities and art thefts (176) vain; megalomaniac; calculating; flair for the theatrical (228) German army trained him as sniper (265) 4. One Way Out
1. Hide In Plain Sight
2. Tough Enough
3. Her Last Chance

Locations, Organizations Found In "Hide In Plain Sight"
Location / Organization Description
al-Shadri clan tribe in the thick of looting and smuggling ancient operations; extremely dangerous (4)
Avalonsmall, private outfit that operates in the black market art trade around the world. We recover stolen and looted art and antiquities (161)
Hamburg, GermanyPrologue location; Grif meeting with two Iraqi men, Annamari; five years before Chapter One
Kennedy Antiquarian BooksFiona's shop (27) description (57)
SeattleGrif in Seattle calling for updates from Ben regarding his assignment to protect Fiona (19)
Sheridan Expeditionsbusy travel agency (299) description (307)
Torrancelocation of an Avalon office (19)
Trixietyrannosaurus rex
Ur-Nammu treasureprincess's headdress, necklace, earrings, bracelet (10)
WyomingGrif meeting Fiona's friends

"Hide In Plain Sight" Quotations
43avoiding the casual "he" or "she" in a conversation wasn't natural at all.   It required considerable effort.   (Fiona)
189People obey the rules only because they're afraid of what will happen if they don't.   (Reinart von Lahr)
214"Which is why people shouldn't have expectations.   That way they'll never be disappointed."   (Grif)
232"Now all you have to do is believe in yourself.   If you want something more out of life, make it happen."   (Fiona)

"Michele Albert -- Hide In Plain Sight" Review and Information Links
Rated Posted Site Notes, Comments, Etc.
---- Michele Albert's WebsiteAuthor (Michele Albert is Michelle Jerott's pseudonym)
---- Michele Albert's FacebookAuthor (Michele Albert is Michelle Jerott's pseudonym)
---- Michele Albert's Wikipediamini biography
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B / warm04-26-2006All About Romance--Sandy Coleman // liked, good take on Albert's skill
3.80 average{10 reviews}Amazonas of: March 30, 2013 // --baltimore0502 = excellent
4.67 average{3 reviews}Barnes & Nobleas of: March 30, 2013
9 / 6 / 902-14-2006Eye on Romance--Tracy (also: Suspense Romance Writers) // okay, buzz words
----Fantastic FictionList of Michelle Jerott's Books
----Fantastic FictionList of Michele Albert's Books
----Fict FactList of Books In "The Avalon Investigations Series"
----Fiction DBList of Michelle Jerott's Books
----Fiction DBList of Michele Albert's Books
3.49 average{10 reviews}Good Readsas of: March 30, 2013 (no impressive review to date)
4.0010-05-2006Joyfully Reviewed--Nanette // a few good details // also on: Amazon
3.63 average{3 reviews}Library Thingas of: March 30, 2013
94--Mrs. Gigglesimpressive review / liked
3.60 average{20 ratings}Paperback Swapas of: March 30, 2013
4.00 05-....-2006RT {Romantic Times} Book Reviews--Jill M. Smith // PR review
2.75 average{4 reviews}Shelfarias of: March 30, 2013
2.0005-30-2006The Romance Reader--Lesley Dunlap // okay review, just didn't like the book
4.1503-30-2013Wolf Bear Does Booksshorter post on Amazon, Fiction DB, Good Reads, Library Thing, Shelfari

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